Обращение к товарищам, которые изучают японский...

[aqua-marina]

меня теперь мучает филологический вопрос...
я нарыла 2 перевода на английский N.M.P.
и теперь меня терзают смутные сомнения... а какой же из переводов более правильный?
это более новый
Romaji
WHERE IS THE HEAVEN? tenji wo hikisaki kono mi wa fukaku tsuranukare
Inori wa tooku anata e todokanu kuchihateta kurosu

Naze shinjitsu hohoende genjitsu wa JUSTICE nai mama?
Eien ni tatakau kono sugata hitomi de uketomete NO PAIN

I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
Mayowanaide ikusen no hitogomi ni (YO INNOCENT? GUILTY na CROSS?)
Kibou no itami wo mune ni kizamu
I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
Ai wa nande hikari dake wo misete (YO kudaranu WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD)
Anata wo ubau no?
NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN

N.M.P. WE'RE”NO MORE PAIN” narase BRING DA NOIZ
(Kei)hou narase BURN IT UP BABY (ei)kou tsudzuku SEARCH LIGHT BABY
(TEA)CUP no naka majiru BLACK & WHITE iwaku DO OR DIE dore mo YOUR CHOICE
(TEEN)no koro sutete kita DREAM LIKE AN AMERICAN DREAM
Ima agaruze STEP SO KEEP ON RUNNING ME &(YOU)
Nani mo (enu) naraba ubaisaru MY GAME

Nee oshiete yo kono itami iyasu no namida janaku
Kiesou ni kurikaesu hakanai kawaita asu dake? NO PAIN

I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
Mayowanaide ikusen no hitogomi ni (YO INNOCENT? GUILTY na CROSS?)
Kibou no itami wo mune ni kizamu
I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
Ai wa nande hikari dake wo misete (YO kudaranu WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD)
Anata wo ubau no?
WHAT A PAINFUL... BUT NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN

English translation
WHERE IS THE HEAVEN? The universe is being tore apart, a deep force penetrating this body
Prayers fail to reach you who is so far away, the Holy Cross has fallen into ruins

Why is the truth smiling when in reality, there is no justice?
Please cast your eyes on these figures as they drowned in an endless war
NO PAIN

I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
So that I do not get lost amidst this crowd of thousands (YO INNOCENT? A GUILTY CROSS?)
I carve into my heart the pain of hope
I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
Why is light the only thing that is charmed by love (YO you fools WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD)
Do you truly exist?
NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN

N.M.P. We're "no more pain", ring it, bring da noiz
Go forth, ring the bell, burn it up baby; forever time continues to flow, search light baby
Black & white mix up inside this teacup, say do or die, it's your choice
To come here, I have forsaken my teenage years, dream like an American dream
Now, each step takes me forward so keep on running me & you
Nothing gained, nothing won, and my game carries on

Say, talk to me, don't just cry because tears are not the cure for this pain
Is this empty barren tomorrow the only thing I get to see when I am on the verge of fading away?

I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
So that I do not get lost amidst this crowd of thousands (YO INNOCENT? A GUILTY CROSS?)
I carve into my heart the pain of hope
I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
Why is light the only thing that is charmed by love (YO you fools WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD)
Do you truly exist?
WHAT A PAINFUL... BUT NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN


а вот более старый
WHERE　IS THE HEAVEN?　
Tenchi wo hikisaki
Kono mi wa fukaku tsuranukare　
Inori wa tooku anata he todokanu
Kuchihateta CROSS

Naze shinjitsu Hohoen de
Genjitsu wa JUSTICE nai mama?
Eien ni Tatakau kono sugata
Hitomi de uketomete NO PAIN

I DON'T　WANNA　LOSE YOU BUT...　　WHAT A PAINFUL　WORLD
Madowanai de ikuzen no hitogomi ni (YO　INNOCENT?　GUILTYna CROSS?)　
Kibou no itami wo
Mune ni kizamu
I DON'T　WANNA　LOSE YOU BUT...　　WHAT A PAINFUL　WORLD
Ai wa nande Hikari dake wo misete (YO　kudaranu　WHAT　A PAINFUL WORLD)　
Anata wo ubau no?
NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN

N.M.P. WE'RE　“NO MORE　PAIN”　（）rase BRING　DA　NOIZ
（）rase BURN IT UP BABY　（Ei）gou tsuduku SEARCH　LIGHT BABY
（TEA）　CUP no naka majiru BLACK & WHITE iwaku DO　OR DIE doremo YOUR CHOICE
（TEEN) no kurosutete kita DREAM　LIKE AN　AMERICAN DREAM
Ima agaru ze Step SO KEEP ON RUNNING ME &　（YOU)
Nanimo (()nu) naraba ()i saru MY GAME

Nee oshiete yo Kono itami
Iyasu no namida janaku
Kiesou ni kurikasesu hakanai
Kawaita asu dake?　NO PAIN

I DON'T　WANNA　LOSE YOU BUT...　　WHAT A PAINFUL　WORLD
Madowanai de ikuzen no hitogomi ni (YO　INNOCENT?　GUILTYna CROSS?)　
Kibou no itami wo
Mune ni kizamu
I DON'T　WANNA　LOSE YOU BUT...　　WHAT A PAINFUL　WORLD
Ai wa nande Hikari dake wo misete (YO　kudaranu　WHAT　A PAINFUL WORLD)　
Anata wo ubau no?
WHAT A PAINFUL...　BUT NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN

WHERE IS THE HEAVEN?
Splitting heaven and earth, It’s a lot for one to go through
Praying that the rusting CROSS will reach you from far away

Why is a real smile?
The reality is that JUSTICE isn’t what it is like now?
For eternity we’ll fight this way
With our eyes we’ll stop it NO PAIN

I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
I don’t want to be confused in the midst of thousands of crowds of people (YO INNOCENT? GUILTY CROSS?)
The pain of hope will be engraved in our hearts
I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
Why is love just light that enchants us (YO foolishness WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD)
Will you be snatched away?
NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN

N.M.P. WE'RE “NO MORE PAIN” BRING DA NOIZ
BURN IT UP BABY (Eternity) The threat continuing SEARCH LIGHT BABY
Inside the (TEA) CUP it’s mixed BLACK & WHITE
To say DO OR DIE Whoever YOUR CHOICE
(TEEN)’s time that’s thrown away DREAM LIKE AN AMERICAN DREAM
Now rise Step SO KEEP ON RUNNING ME &　(YOU)
Whatever (enu) leave MY GAME

Hey teach me
How to heal this pain without tears
To make it disappear, Repeating it over and over again and not be thirsty tomorrow?　
NO PAIN

I DON'T　WANNA　LOSE YOU BUT...　　WHAT A PAINFUL　WORLD
I don’t want to be confused in the midst of thousands of crowds of people (YO　INNOCENT?　GUILTY CROSS?)　
The pain of hope will be engraved in our hearts
I DON'T　WANNA　LOSE YOU BUT...　　WHAT A PAINFUL　WORLD
Why is love just light that enchants us (YO　foolishness　WHAT　A PAINFUL WORLD)　
Will you be snatched away?
WHAT A PAINFUL...　BUT NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN

так какой же более правильный, потому что отличия в переводе довольно существенны...??????

@музыка: Остановите землю

@настроение: выходной...

@темы: перевод, варианты, интерес, филологическое, KAT-TUN

Comments

[aoi_kaze]

а кандзи есть? так точно не скажу, потому что по романдзи иероглифы я не различаю ><" не та стадия просветления..
но, думается мне, это просто обычные лирические вариации.

[aqua-marina]

Kanji
WHERE IS THE HEAVEN? 天地を引き裂き この身は深く貫かれ
祈りは 遠くあなたへ届かぬ 朽ち果てた十字架

なぜ真実 微笑んで 現実は JUSTICE無いまま?
永遠に戦うこの姿 瞳で受け止めて NO PAIN

I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
迷わないで 幾千の人混みに(YO INNOCENT? GUILTYなCROSS?)
希望の痛みを 胸に刻む
I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
愛は何で 光だけを魅せて(YO 下らぬWHAT A PAINFUL WORLD)
あなたを奪うの?
NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN

N.M.P. WE'RE”NO MORE PAIN” 鳴らせBRING DA NOIZ
(警 報鳴らせBURN IT UP BABY (永 劫続くSEARCH LIGHT BABY
(TEA)CUPの中混じるBLACK & WHITE曰くDO OR DIE どれもYOUR CHOICE
(TEEN) の頃捨ててきたDREAM LIKE AN AMERICAN DREAM
今上がるぜSTEP SO KEEP ON RUNNING ME &(YOU)
何も(得ぬならば奪い去るMY GAME

ねえ 教えてよ この痛み癒すの 涙じゃなく
消えそうに 繰り返す儚い 渇いた明日だけ? NO PAIN

I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
迷わないで 幾千の人混みに(YO INNOCENT? GUILTYなCROSS?)
希望の痛みを 胸に刻む
I DON'T WANNA LOSE YOU BUT... WHAT A PAINFUL WORLD
愛は何で 光だけを魅せて(YO 下らぬWHAT A PAINFUL WORLD)
あなたを奪うの?
WHAT A PAINFUL... BUT NO-NO-NO MORE PAIN

[aqua-marina]

не обращайте внимание на смайлы с жж системы не совпадают